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Q. What is your most memorable family gathering? What happened?
A. When My family was in Yosematy, which is Mountain in USA, we met the bear during camping. Then, the manager of Mountain chased the bear away with a gun. That\'s my most memorable family gathering.
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Hello, Ju[이름]!
The story is interesting and memorable, which makes your response engaging! Overall, good job keeping your sentences simple and direct. ^^
~ Trixia
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When My family was in Yosematy, which is Mountain in USA, we met the bear during camping. Then, the manager of Mountain chased the bear away with a gun. That\'s my most memorable family gathering.
- When my family was in Yosemite, which is a mountain area in the USA, we met a bear during camping. Then, the park manager chased the bear away with a gun. That was my most memorable family gathering.
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