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학생이 쓴 원문
Make a composition out of this:
Is it better to be physically attractive or intelligent?
I think genius more better.
Is set since birth.
For example, I saw prodigy sometime, but I have never heard a baby with nice body.
강사 첨삭
Hi J!
Good point! I am sure you can even write longer compositions J. I encourage you to write more. You have very good thoughts and I know you can express it in writing too.
Thanks for your time tonight J! Sleep well! See you!
~Teacher Alice
I think genius more better.
>> I think being genius is much better. Is set since birth.
>> It is set since birth.For example, I saw prodigy sometime, but I have never heard a baby with nice body.
>> For example, I saw a prodigy one time, but I have never heard a baby with a perfect body.
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