Home work
학생이 쓴 원문
1. They were accused with breaking into a shop.
2. I agree to playing darts.
3. They apologize for being late.
4. She doesn't believe in getting lost in the wood.
5. The reporter is blamed for writing bad stories.
Book Reprot : Dinosaurs before dark.
Annie and Jack found tree house. In tree house there was many books.
Jack likes books and he choose dinosaurs book.
Then he said "I wish I could see a Pteranodon for real."
Suddenly tree house spinning and they went to long ago as dinosaurs live.
Annie and Jack was very surprise. (Because they go to long ago)
And they met many kinds of dinosaurs.
For example the met Tyrannosaurs so they must be die.
But Pteranodon save them. And theywant to go their house.
So they go in to the tree house and they said "We want to go our house."
Then, tree house spinning and go back their house.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I appreciate the effort you poured into this homework. I think you were a bit confused with the proper use of some prepositions though. Please study my corrections here. I corrected your book report too. It was a great story! Keep it up! Talk to you later! CIAO~
~Teacher Marie~
1. They were accused with breaking into a shop.
>> They were accused of breaking into a shop.2. I agree to playing darts.
>> I agree with playing darts.3. They apologized for being late.
>> CORRECT4. She doesn\'t believe in getting lost in the woods.
>> CORRECT5. The reporter is blamed for writing bad stories. >> CORRECTBook Reprot : Dinosaurs before dark.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Book Report: Dinosaurs before dark.
*Be careful with the spelling. ^^
Annie and Jack found tree house.
>> Annie and Jack found a tree house.
In tree house there was many books.
>> In the tree house, there were many books.Jack likes books and he choose dinosaurs book.
>> Jack likes books. He chose a book about dinosaurs.Then he said, \"I wish I could see a Pteranodon for real.\"
>> CORRECT
*Great sentence! ^^Suddenly tree house spinning and they went to long ago as dinosaurs live.
>> Suddenly, the tree house was spinning and they went back to the time when the dinosaurs were still alive.Annie and Jack was very surprise. (Because they go to long ago)
>> Annie and Jack were very surprised because they went back in time.And they met many kinds of dinosaurs.
>> CORRECTFor example the met Tyrannosaurs so they must be die.
>> For instance, they met the Tyrannosaurus so they almost died.But Pteranodon save them.
>> But the Pteranodon saved them.
And theywant to go their house.
>> They wanted to go back to their house.So they go in to the tree house and they said \"We want to go our house.\"
>> So they went into the tree house and they said \"We want to go back to our house.\"Then, tree house spinning and go back their house.
>> Just then, the tree house started spinning again and they went back to their house.
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