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2012-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi, Jane ! I guess you are sleeping now. I am envy that you always wake up earlier than myself. You are so diligent!! Anyway, I am getting losing my confidence due to the busy schedule. I don't have enough time to study. Do you think that it is more meaningful to meet people who work at my desire company than to study entrance exam? I know the answer but I am not sure about that. You are "older" than me , so please give me a piece of advices. haha By the way, those are my answers for homework. COLUMN 1: 1. I don't think that is relevant. d 2. Let's skip that question for now. b 3. I hope that is clear for everyone. a 4. We're getting side-tracked. e 5. I'm not sure what you mean. c COLUMN 2: a. I assume all of you understand it. b. I don't want to talk about it at this time. c. I need you to clarify that for me. d. It's not important. e. The focus of the meeting is being lost.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I was still up when you wrote this composition. I went to bed at past 12 midnight last night. You envy me for I get up early, but I envy you because you don\'t have to get up so early. I believe that you are also diligent. Well, I understand how busy you are, but I hope you won\'t lose confidence because of that. Try to manage your time well and set your priorities. It\'s good to prepare for the entrance exam, but getting along with people in your company is not a bad idea. Besides, you told me before that for you, success is having a good relationship with the people around you. I agree with you because what is achievement if you\'re all alone? I mean, we have a temporal life and we don\'t want to live with regrets. Personally, I don\'t want to look back to my past regretting that I didn\'t have much fun because I was too busy with work. I would like to share this with you: \"Successful people focus on the destination whereas happy people focus on the journey\". Which one would you like become -- a successful person or a happy person? I hope you can be both. Ponder on this but don\'t get stressed-out. Take care and I\'ll talk with you later. T. JanE ^^ Hi, Jane ! I guess you are sleeping now. >> Correct I am envy that you always wake up earlier than myself. >> I envy you because you wake up earlier than I do. You are so diligent!! >> Correct Anyway, I am getting losing my confidence due to the busy schedule. >> Anyway, I am losing my confidence due to my busy schedule. I don\'t have enough time to study. >> Correct Do you think that it is more meaningful to meet people who work at my desire company than to study entrance exam? >> Do you think that it is more meaningful to meet people who work at my desired company than to study for the exntrance exam? I know the answer but I am not sure about that. >> Correct You are \"older\" than me , so please give me a piece of advices. haha >> You are older than me, so please give me a piece of advice. By the way, those are my answers for homework. >> By the way, here are my answers to the homework. COLUMN 1:1. I don\'t think that is relevant. d >> Correct 2. Let\'s skip that question for now. b >> Correct 3. I hope that is clear for everyone. a >> Correct 4. We\'re getting side-tracked. e >> Correct 5. I\'m not sure what you mean. c >> Correct COLUMN 2:a. I assume all of you understand it.b. I don\'t want to talk about it at this time.c. I need you to clarify that for me.d. It\'s not important.e. The focus of the meeting is being lost.  

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