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2012-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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1. I stopped Andrew from smoking. 2. They often talk about travelling to New Zealand. 3. Frank thinks about playing chess. 4. We warned them from using this computer. 5. The patient worries about having the check-up. <Book report : Pirate Mom> Pete likes to play pirate but his mom hate pirate because Pirate isn't polite. One day, his mom gives him a ticket. The tickets to see the Amazing Marco. So they go to see Amazing Marco show. In Marco's most amazing trick, Hypno-Trance Marco pick Pete's mom and Pete said, "I want when she wakes up, she will be a pirate" When she wakes up, she became pirate. But it has a problem. Mom fight with neighborhood, she stole clothes and she doing very very strange. So Pete goes to Marco and Marco return the Pete's mom.

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Hi [이름]! Thanks for dropping by and doing your homework. ^^ The book report you wrote is quite amusing. I think Pete learned his lesson here. Haha. Here are some corrections, please review them properly. Have a pleasant day! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1. I stopped Andrew from smoking. >> CORRECT2. They often talk about travelling to New Zealand. >> CORRECT3. Frank thinks about playing chess.>> CORRECT4. We warned them from using this computer. >> CORRECT5. The patient worries about having the check-up. >> CORRECT<Book report : Pirate Mom> >> CORRECTPete likes to play pirate but his mom hate pirate because Pirate isn\'t polite.>> Pete likes to play pirate but his mom hates it because pirates are not polite.One day, his mom gives him a ticket. >> CORRECT OR >> One day, his mom gave him tickets. The tickets to see the Amazing Marco. >> These are the tickets to the Amazing Marco\'s show.So they go to see Amazing Marco show. >> So they went to see the show. In Marco\'s most amazing trick, Hypno-Trance Marco pick Pete\'s mom and Pete said, \"I want when she wakes up, she will be a pirate\" >> In Marco\'s most amazing trick, the hypno-trance, Marco picked Pete\'s mom. Pete said, \"I want her to be a pirate when she wakes up\".When she wakes up, she became pirate. >> When she woke up, she became a pirate. But it has a problem. >> But there was a problem. Mom fight with neighborhood, she stole clothes and she doing very very strange. >> His mom fought with the neighbors, stole clothes and she did some very strange things.So Pete goes to Marco and Marco return the Pete\'s mom. >> So Pete went to Marco and asked him to turn his mom back to normal.

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