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Hi there!
It would really be a great opportunity and experience if you join the Olympics. However, you really need a lot of time to practice and enhance your skills. Anyway, please see the corrections for your improvement. See you! Take care.
T. Marie
If you can participate as an athlete in the Olympics and play any sports, EXCEPT SOCCER, what would it be and why? Do you think you will win?
I would be Swimming athlete because in Korea the weather is too hot and I like water.
>> If I were to join the Olympics, I\'d like to be a swimmer. Since it\'s very hot in Korea in summer, I like staying in the cool water.
I think I will lose I\'m not good at swimming just i like swimming. ;;;;
>> However, I think I\'m going to lose because I\'m not good at swimming. I just like doing it.
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