Home work.
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to beach with my friends actually I went beach with teachers and many friends because the teachers take us to the beach (20 students first arrival.)
So I play very fun with my friends. I don't know what's name the beach it's in a mercantile marine college.
1. Do some research and find out who is the first Korean to receive the Nobel prize. = kim dae jung presient.
2. Who is Alfred Nobel? Where is he from? Alfred Novel is person who leave a will to give good people Novel prize and he come from Sweden.
3. What is Newton's first name? Isaac.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Wow! It seemed like you enjoyed soaking in the sun at the beach with your friends. Good for you! I\'m glad you were able to have fun despite the heat wave. Good job in your homework. Just be careful with the spelling and syntax. Make sure to answer in complete sentences next time, too. Have a great night! CIAO!
~Teacher Marie~
I went to beach with my friends actually I went beach with teachers and many friends because the teachers take us to the beach (20 students first arrival.)
>> I went to the beach with my friends. Actually, I went there with my teachers and my friends. The teachers took the first 20 students to arrive to the beach.So I play very fun with my friends.
>> So I played many fun games with my friends.
OR >> So I had lots of fun with my friends.
I don\'t know what\'s name the beach it\'s in a mercantile marine college. >> CORRECT
OR >> I don\'t know the name of the beach but it\'s in a mercantile marine college.1. Do some research and find out who is the first Korean to receive the Nobel prize. = >> CORRECT
kim dae jung presient.
>> The first Korean to receive the Nobel prize was President Kim Daejung.2. Who is Alfred Nobel? Where is he from? >> CORRECT
Alfred Novel is person who leave a will to give good people Novel prize and he come from Sweden.
>> Alfred Nobel is the man who left a will to give good and outstanding people a prize or an award. He was from Sweden.3. What is Newton\'s first name? >> CORRECT
Isaac.
>> Newton\'s first name is Isaac.
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