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The KTX and smart phone has a great influence.
KTX go very fast than the other trains so we're not late for our appointment.
Smart phone has search the internet, many games and special skills.
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Hello [이름]! Thanks for doing your composition! Good job! I agree with you. These are such awesome inventions that helped our lives become more convenient and comfortable. Check my corrections here and make sure you take note of the mistakes. Enjoy your day! CIAO!
~Teacher Marie~
The KTX and smart phone has a great influence.
>> The KTX and the smart phone both have great influence in my life.KTX go very fast than the other trains so we\'re not late for our appointment.
>> CORRECT
OR >> The KTX runs faster than the other trains so we don\'t get late for our appointments.Smart phone has search the internet, many games and special skills.
>> With the smart phone, we can search the web, play games and use other applications.
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