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2012-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Wrie a paragraph of not less that 5 sentences. It is answer 'wrie'? And It is 'Write'? My dream is the youngest women weatherman. So, Next year plan be going to in good graduate school. Now, I'm in the pipeline hard english study and my major study. After I will test, and get the good grade. Surely, I be going to the graduate school. and study for a degree. I'm approval the youngest women weatherman. I can do it!

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That\'s the spirit! If you belive in yourself then it won\'t be difficult for you to achieve your goals. I pray and hope that you will become the youngest woman weather man in Korea soon. Keep fighting! T. Cam Wrie a paragraph of not less that 5 sentences.It is answer \'wrie\'? >>Correct! And It is \'Write\'? >>Or is it \'write\'? (It\'s actually \'write\'. Sorry for the typo.) My dream is the youngest women weatherman. >>My dream is to be the youngest woman weatherman.So, Next year plan be going to in good graduate school. >>So next year, I plan to go to a good graduate school.Now, I\'m in the pipeline hard english study and my major study. >>I\'m studying hard in English as well as my major.After I will test, and get the good grade. >>After that, I will take a test and get a good grade.Surely, I be going to the graduate school. and study for a degree. >>Surely I will be going to a graduate school and study for a degree.I\'m approval the youngest women weatherman. >>I will be approved as the youngest woman weatherman.I can do it! >>Correct!

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