home work
학생이 쓴 원문
The independnce day and the Gwang Bok Jeol, it is used in much the same sence.
the Gwang Bok Jeol Celebrations.
Gwang Bok Jeol, I hoist the Korean flag.
I provide places to relax and take a rest.
I have time to recharge oneself.
강사 첨삭
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The independnce day and the Gwang Bok Jeol, it is used in much the same sence.
>>correct..
>>Observe proper spelling of the word SENSE.the Gwang Bok Jeol Celebrations.>>We celebrate Gwang Bok Jeol.Gwang Bok Jeol, I hoist the Korean flag.
>>correctI provide places to relax and take a rest.
>>correctI have time to recharge oneself.
>>correct
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