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2012-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello, Teacher! I and parents' is several kinds. The main reason is that style. The Parents' style is not unusual. However I'm very exclusive. Once more thinking is different. The Parents' is conservative. However I thinking frank. Thank you. Bye^^

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Hello baby, good afternoon! Thank you so much for taking your time to make homework today. Keep up the good work my dear. I will call you again tomorrow and have a good day baby.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Hello, Teacher!I and parents\' is several kinds.>>My parents and I are different. The main reason is that style.>>The main reason is because of our style.The Parents\' style is not unusual. >>correct >>My parent\'s styl is unusual. However I\'m very exclusive.>>correctOnce more thinking is different. >>Another thing that is different is the way of thinking.The Parents\' is conservative. >>Parents are conservative. However I thinking frank.>>However I\'m liberated.Thank you.Bye^^

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