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학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning ^^
I don't agree to it.
I prefer to living in big city because there are a lor of thing worth of learning and seeing around big city such as big book stores and various kinds of fancy cafes and restaurants.
See you later^^
강사 첨삭
Hello there. ^^
You got a very interesting point here.
You do know what you want.
Your brief expressions are grammatical so it would be better for you to cut your very long sentences into short ones.
In this way, you would avoid ungrammatical constructions.
I am looking forward to talking to you again. ^^
_T. Camille
Good morning ^^>> Correct.I don\'t agree to it.
>> Correct.
>> OR, I beg to disagree.I prefer to living in big city because there are a lor of thing worth of learning and seeing around big city such as big book stores and various kinds of fancy cafes and restaurants. >> I prefer to live in a big city because there are a lot of things worth learning and seeing around it like big book stores and various kinds of fancy cafes and restaurants.See you later^^
>> Correct.
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