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English is official [이름]guage and important communication. Many countries use one [이름]guage. so we should learn English. I didn't know to need the English. as win design award . I traveled the Quebec in canada . There are many countries people to tourism. I was amazing that many countries people talk each other. !! Then I realized the need for English. After i travel, I have been doing to study hard English.

Hi Victoria, great work in this composition =) I appreciate the value you give to English, well, you are right and based from your experience, there really are a lot of uses of English and many foreigners do use them for communication. Keep up the good work, okay, and see you in class. Take care =) Goodnight!

- T. Michelle ^^

English is official [이름]guage and important communication.

>>> English is the official [이름]guage and important in communication.
Many countries use one [이름]guage.

>>> Correct
so we should learn English.

>>> Correct; Just capitalize So
I didn\'t know to need the English.

>>> I didn\'t know that we need English.
as win design award .

>>> To win the award for designs.
I traveled the Quebec in canada .

>>> I traveled Quebec in Canada.
There are many countries people to tourism.

>>> There were many tourists.
I was amazing that many countries people talk each other. !!

>>> I was amazed that many foreigners from different countries talk to each other.
Then I realized the need for English.

>>>  Correct
After i travel, I have been doing to study hard English.

>>> After that travel, I have been studying English hard.