home work
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I am [Name] girl.
2. I like to take a trip.
3. When I am sad I leave my home to the study.
4. I've learn that painting.
5. People that don't know me think I am diligent.
6. People know me that I do anything hard.
7. People don't know that I have many possibilities.
8. I admire people who are employed abroad.
9. My strengths is Passionate.
10. One of my weaknesses is don't be tenacity.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for giving your best in answering the following. You did a good job. Though, look through the corrections I\'ve made. Let me know if you have any questions.
T. Michelle
1. I am [Name] girl.
>>I am a bright girl.2. I like to take a trip.>>Correct!
3. When I am sad I leave my home to the study.>>When I am sad I leave my home and study.
4. I\'ve learn that painting.>>I\'ve learned when you give don\'t expect anything in return.
5. People that don\'t know me think I am diligent.>>Correct!
6. People know me that I do anything hard.>>People know me that I work hard.
7. People don\'t know that I have many possibilities.>>People don\'t know that I have many qualities.
8. I admire people who are employed abroad.>>Correct!
9. My strengths is Passionate.>>My strengths are my passion and hardwork.
10. One of my weaknesses is don\'t be tenacity.
>>One of my weaknesses is not being tenacious.
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