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2012-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello, Today, I'm so tired. But I'm worthwhile^^ The last week was extremely enjoyable. Because, I was go at the pension with my best friend. We are enjoy the party. And, We eat the 제주삼겹살,전복,전어 and wine. I taked a rest. So I'm happy. Good Bye^^

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Wow I\'m glad to hear that you had a great time with your bestfriend this weekend.. Anyway baby here are the corrections I made for you. Thank you so much for making your homework and talk to you again tomorrow.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Hello, >>correctToday, I\'m so tired. >>correctBut I\'m worthwhile^^ >>But its worth the time.The last week was extremely enjoyable. >>correctBecause, I was go at the pension with my best friend. >>Because I went to the pension with my bestfriend.We are enjoy the party. >>correctAnd, We eat the 제주삼겹살,전복,전어 and wine. >>correct I taked a rest. >>I took a restSo I\'m happy. >>correctGood Bye^^

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