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I did <Old US documents disprove Japan’s claims over Dokdo > aritcle's last question.
1. Do you think these documents can put an end to the dispute over Dokdo? Why or why not?
I think not. Although this document can be a evidence that dokdo is korean territory, but Japan never agree about this fact. Moreover It's hard things to make Japan give up to insist this territory dispute.
2. Do you think Washington will make a stand by supporting Korea through these documents? Why or why not?
I dont know exactly. first of all, this problem is very sesitive one, two counrty will never concession.
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Here are my corrections for you:
hello^^ >> Correct
>> Hello! (Please be careful with your capitalization)I did <Old US documents disprove Japan’s claims over Dokdo > aritcle\'s last question. >> Correct1. Do you think these documents can put an end to the dispute over Dokdo? Why or why not?
>> CorrectI think not. Although this document can be a evidence that dokdo is korean territory, but Japan never agree about this fact.
>> Correct
>> I think not. Although this document can be an evidence that dokdo is a Korean territory, but Japan never agreed about this fact.
Moreover It\'s hard things to make Japan give up to insist this territory dispute.
>> Moreover, It\'s hard to make Japan give up this fight and to insist them about this territorial dispute.2. Do you think Washington will make a stand by supporting Korea through these documents? Why or why not?I dont know exactly. first of all, this problem is very sesitive one, two counrty will never concession.
>> I dont know exactly. first of all, this problem is very a sesitive one, two counrty will never be at concession. (Well said^^)
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