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First, I'm sorry. It may be right.
I think two conflicting opinions.
I really had not enough money to homeless people and
homeless people are Themselves the situation in order to attain enlightenment.
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First, I\'m sorry. It may be right.
>>I\'m sorry but I\'m not sure if it\'s right.I think two conflicting opinions.
>>I have thought of 2 conflicting opinions.I really had not enough money to homeless people and
>>Homeless dont have enough money.homeless people are Themselves the situation in order to attain enlightenment.
>>Homeless people do everything to attain enlightenment.
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