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2012-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello Good morning. Chusok falls on Sep 30 this year. I will go to the 영주. Because 영주 is one's home. And I exchange greetings with relative. however Chusok time is short. We were sorry to have to say goodbye.

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Hello there!! A fantastic Friday~~ Well, Chusok is fast approaching and I\'m glad to know that you\'ve got a plan already..^^ It\'ll be good to have time with your family and to take a rest after a very busy week at work..^^ Anyway, let\'s look forward to that..^^ Have a nice weekend and see you soon! xoxot. Cam- Hello >>Hello!Good morning.>>CORRECT!Chusok falls on Sep 30 this year. >>Chusok falls on the 30th of September this year.I will go to the 영주. Because 영주 is one\'s home. >>I will go to 영주 because  영주 is my hometown. Suggestion: I couldn\'t understand the meaning of this 영주 so I just copied it. Please try to write the words carefully next time. ^^And I exchange greetings with relative. >>And I\'ll exchange greetings with my relatives.however Chusok time is short. >>However, the celebration of Chusok  is short.We were sorry to have to say goodbye. >>We will be sorry to say good bye shortly.

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