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Hello
Good morning.
Chusok falls on Sep 30 this year.
I will go to the 영주. Because 영주 is one's home.
And I exchange greetings with relative.
however Chusok time is short.
We were sorry to have to say goodbye.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!!
A fantastic Friday~~
Well, Chusok is fast approaching and I\'m glad to know that you\'ve got a plan already..^^
It\'ll be good to have time with your family and to take a rest after a very busy week at work..^^
Anyway, let\'s look forward to that..^^
Have a nice weekend and see you soon!
xoxot. Cam-
Hello
>>Hello!Good morning.>>CORRECT!Chusok falls on Sep 30 this year.
>>Chusok falls on the 30th of September this year.I will go to the 영주. Because 영주 is one\'s home.
>>I will go to 영주 because 영주 is my hometown.
Suggestion: I couldn\'t understand the meaning of this 영주 so I just copied it. Please try to write the words carefully next time. ^^And I exchange greetings with relative.
>>And I\'ll exchange greetings with my relatives.however Chusok time is short.
>>However, the celebration of Chusok is short.We were sorry to have to say goodbye.
>>We will be sorry to say good bye shortly.
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