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2014-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Peoples who live in korea are get a job from 24age to 26age. Because ordinary peoples search for work after graduate in university.

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Hello [이름]! Thank you for answering your very first homework. I hope that next time, you will make more sentences because I know that you can do it! It is also a good way to develop your writing skill. Anyway, take care and have a great day ahead. ~Teacher Kelly^^ Peoples who live in korea are get a job from 24age to 26age. >> People in Korea start getting a job from the age of 24 to 26. >> Koreans usually start working from the age of 24 to 26.Because ordinary peoples search for work after graduate in university. >> Because ordinary people start looking for a job after graduation.

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