home work;20190814
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Q : What changes would you consider making to your diet to make it more healthy? Please explain your answer.
A : Usually I have a meal irregulary being pressed for time even convinience food. The changes to making healthy is firts, having a meal maked by wholesome ingredients. I couldn’t take time leisurely, but I could have effort for making simple food.
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Good afternoon Lilo^^
Thank you for doing your first homework!
Q : What changes would you consider making to your diet to make it more healthy? Please explain your answer.
A : Usually I have a meal irregulary being pressed for time even convinience food.
>>I have irregular meals even convenience food because I am usually pressed for time.
The changes to making healthy is firts, having a meal maked by wholesome ingredients.
>>The changes to making healthy is first, having a meal made with wholesome ingredients.
I couldn’t take time leisurely, but I could have effort for making simple food.
>>I couldn\'t afford to take the time off, but I was able to make simple food.
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