home work:20190815
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Q : Do you prefer to exercise at home, at the gym, or outdoors? Why?
A : I prefer to exercise at outdoor. Because when I exercise there, I feel freshness. Especially I love walking in the forest enjoying sight and feeling the nature.
but when I wanna swim, I go to pool.
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Hello Lilo^^
How\'s your Friday? I guess you are making delicious coffee at this time - hmmm.
Thanks for doing your homework, I really appreciate your effort.
Q : Do you prefer to exercise at home, at the gym, or outdoors? Why?
A : I prefer to exercise at outdoor.
>>I prefer to exercise outdoors.
Because when I exercise there, I feel freshness.
>>Because if I exercise there, I feel refreshed.
Especially I love walking in the forest enjoying sight and feeling the nature.
>>Especially, I like walking in the forest, enjoying the sight, and spending time in nature.
but when I wanna swim, I go to pool.
>>When I want to swim, I go to the swimming pool.
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