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2012-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello^^ I think I regard every assignment as a challenge. And I success my challenge . I'm happy. I count your blessings. Many people loves me, and I feel i am in heaven on earth. Good bey.

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Hello there, too.^^
I am glad that you take every assignment that I give you as a challenge.
This sure will aid you to succeed.
Have a great day!
_T.Camille^^
Hello^^
>> Correct
I think I regard every assignment as a challenge.
>> Correct
And I success my challenge .
>> And I succeeded in meeting this challenge.
I\'m happy.
>> Correct
I count your blessings.
>> Correct
Many people loves me, and I feel i am in heaven on earth.
>> Many people love me and I feel like I am in heaven on earth.
 Good bey.
>> Goodbye.

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