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2012-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello^^ I'm favorite of the week is Sunday. Because I feel long time. So, I have free time. Free time is meeting with my friend. And I trying to English study. Good bye~~

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Hi baby, good afternoon. I always appreciate you doing your homework though you are very busy.. Two thubs up for doing a very good job. By the way here are the modifications I made for you.. Take care always my dear and have a great weekend.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Hello^^I\'m favorite of the week is Sunday. >>My favorite day of the week is Sunday.Because I feel long time. >>Because I feel that this day is very long.So, I have free time. >>correctFree time is meeting with my friend. >>I usually meet my friends during my free time.And I trying to English study.>>And I also try to study English.Good bye~~

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