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Thank you for correcting my sentence. 1.Do you think Seoul can be completely "smoke-free"? Why or why not? If we make place for smoking and punish someone who smokes in non-smoking area for smoking, smokers don't smoke in non-smoking area. So I think Seoul can be smoke-fee. 2.What is your stand on this smoking ban? Are you against it or do you support it? I support it. Many smokers smoke in the street. That harms people around smokers. I experienced being injured my right arm from flying cigarette ash. So I think non-smoking area must be.

Hi there! Happy Friday! Thank you for doing your homework. Thank you for your thoughts about a smoke-free Seoul. I agree with you. Good thoughts, good job! I hope the corrections I have made for you will help improve your English. Take care! ----T.Ritchel----   Thank you for correcting my sentence.>>>CORRECT1.Do you think Seoul can be completely \"smoke-free\"? Why or why not? If we make place for smoking and punish someone who smokes in non-smoking area for smoking, smokers don\'t smoke in non-smoking area. >>>If we make a place for smoking and punish people who smoke in non-smoking areas, smokers won\'t smoke in non-smoking areas.  So I think Seoul can be smoke-fee. >>>CORRECT2.What is your stand on this smoking ban? Are you against it or do you support it? I support it. >>>CORRECT Many smokers smoke in the street. >>>CORRECT  That harms people around smokers. >>>That harms people around them. >>>OR That can harm people around them.I experienced being injured my right arm from flying cigarette ash. >>>I experienced being injured in my right arm from a flying cigarette ash.  So I think non-smoking area must be. >>>So I think non-smoking areas are necessary. >>>OR So I think that non-smoking areas are a must.