Home work.

2012-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Jim is taller than I am. My sister is shorter than I am. My brother isn`t fat he`s stocky. The word "skinny" is slightly more negative than the word thin. He`s completely bald. he lost all of his hair years ago

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

Thank you for doing a good job in your homework. Keep it up!

I hope to see more neatly done homework next time.

Have a nice day!!

--Teacher Michelle ^^ ----

Jim is taller than I am.
>>Correct.
My sister is shorter than I am.
>>Correct.
My brother isn`t fat he`s stocky.
>>Correct.
The word \"skinny\" is slightly more negative than the word thin.
>>Correct.
He`s completely bald.

>>Correct.

he lost all of his hair years ago

>>Correct. (Capitalize the first letter of the first word in a sentence.)

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