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2013-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

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Homework for January 18, 2013 Comprehension Questions 1.Which Middle Eastern conflict is this report mainly about? It is mainly reported about conflict of between Israel and Palestine. 2.How did the prime minister of Israel justify the aerial attacks on Gaza? He said that rampant rocket attacks from Gaza has been killing and terrorizing innocent civilians. 3.Why does the report mention Egypt? It is the reason that Egyptian officials to try to broker a cease-fire between the palestinians and Israelis.

강사 첨삭

Hello!

Thank You for sending in your answers to your homework.

You really did great on it and I am so grateful about it.

I wish that you will always have a great time!

.T.Joan^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Homework for January 18, 2013
Comprehension Questions
1.Which Middle Eastern conflict is this report mainly about?
It is mainly reported about conflict of between Israel and Palestine.
>>Correct [be careful with your grammar]^^

OR >>The report is about the conflict between Israel and the Hamas group in Gaza.
2.How did the prime minister of Israel justify the aerial attacks on Gaza?
He said that rampant rocket attacks from Gaza has been killing and terrorizing
innocent civilians.
>>Correct

OR >>The prime minister of Israel justified the aerial attacks on Gaza by saying that Hamas has been repeatedly attacking Israel with rocket attacks that are killing and terrorizing teh people of Israel.

3.Why does the report mention Egypt?
It is the reason that Egyptian officials to try to broker a cease-fire
between the palestinians and Israelis.

>> Correct

OR >>The report mentions Egypt because Egyptian officials are trying to negotiate a cease-fire between the Palestinians and Israelis.

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