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2013-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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On Thursday Wy wipe was so sick and I had to take care of my children. But I had a today's lecture, so I turn on the television , I trid to speak in english with you. After 18 minutes, Television Program was over and then my daughter want to see another program. My daughter was so young that I couldn't talk about todays study anymore. I had to quit in english study. I'm sorry about that. 1. The pipe in my kitchen is leaking 2. I got in an accident and ________ my bumper. b. dented 3. My phone battery ________. b. ended 4. I fell and ________ my arm. b. bruised 5. I spilled some wine and ________ the tablecloth. b. stained 6. Our washing machine ________. a. broke down 7. I ________ a tooth while I was eating dinner . a. chipped 8. We ________ gas on the way to work. a. ran out of 9. I forgot my keys so now I'm ________ of my apartment. b. locked out 10. I ________ my head on the kitchen cupboard. b. collided

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir Jason!! T[이름]k you for doing your homework. T[이름]ks for sharing your experience as well. :) I understand why we had to finish the class earlier. I know that you have your priorities and your duties as well. Anyway, kindly practice some of the corrections given.. ~teacher Heidi~ On Thursday Wy wipe was so sick and I had to take care of my children. >>Last Thursday my wife was so sick and so I had to take care of my children.But I had a today\'s lecture, so I turn on the television, I trid to speak in english with you.>> But I will have today\'s class, so I turn on the television, I will try to talk in English with you. After 18 minutes, Television Program was over and then my daughter want to see another program.>>After 18 minutes, The program in the television is over and my daughter want to watch another program. My daughter was so young that I couldn\'t talk about todays study anymore.>>My daughter is so young that I couldn\'t talk to her about today\'s class. I had to quit in english study.>>I had to cancel my English class. I\'m sorry about that. >>CORRECT!!1. The pipe in my kitchen is leaking>>Correct!!2. I got in an accident and ________ my bumper. b. dented>>CORRECT!!3. My phone battery ________. b. ended>>My phone battery died.4. I fell and ________ my arm. b. bruised>>CORRECT!!5. I spilled some wine and ________ the tablecloth. b. stained>>CORRECT!!6. Our washing machine ________. a. broke down>>Correct!!7. I ________ a tooth while I was eating dinner . a. chipped>>CORRECT!!8. We ________ gas on the way to work. a. ran out of>>CORRECT!!9. I forgot my keys so now I\'m ________ of my apartment. b. locked out>>CORRECT!!10. I ________ my head on the kitchen cupboard. b. collided >>I bumped my head on the kitchen cupboard.  

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