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Hello It is very common in Korea that working for company during 12 hours straight. Only 50 years ago Korea was one of the poorest countries in the world. My family generation had to work and work for getting out of poverty. And then Korea has risen rapidly as global economic power. Our family generation had to sacrifice for their life. These days It was c[이름]ged. Working is very important fact in my life but I want to be having a time for relaxation. I will try to do my best in my company but I don't want work for a longtime. I want to be having a time with my family and enjoying my life for leisure activity. For my life I have to manage time management. T[이름]ks 1. I will go to the concert, but only if you go as well. 2. I brought along a sandwich, therefore I get hungry. 3. Whenever she calls me, I feel very happy. 4. Take this photo, while you can remember me. 5. until he apologizes for what he did. 6. where 7. as if 8. until 9. why 10. beacuse

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It is very common in Korea that working for company during 12 hours straight.

>> It is very common in Korea to work in a company for 12 hours straight.
Only 50 years ago Korea was one of the poorest countries in the world.

>>  Fifty years ago, Korea was one of the poorest countries in the world.
My family generation had to work and work for getting out of poverty.

>> My family\'s earlier generation had to work and work to get out from poverty.
And then Korea has risen rapidly as global economic power.

>> And then Korea has risen rapidly to global economic power.
Our family generation had to sacrifice for their life.

>> Our family\'s generations had to sacrifice their lives.
These days It was c[이름]ged.

>> These days, this has c[이름]ged.
Working is very important fact in my life but I want to be having a time for relaxation.

>> Working is a very important fact in my life but I want to have time for relaxation.
I will try to do my best in my company but I don\'t want work for a longtime.

>> Correct. (word check: long time)
I want to be having a time with my family and enjoying my life for leisure activity.

>> I want to have time for my family and enjoy life with leisure activities.
For my life I have to manage time management.

>> In my life, I have to manage my time properly.
T[이름]ks
>> Correct.

1. I will go to the concert, but only if you go as well.

>> Correct.
2. I brought along a sandwich, therefore I get hungry.
>>  Answer: b. in case

3. Whenever she calls me, I feel very happy.

>>  Correct. 
4. Take this photo, while you can remember me.

>> Answer: b. so that
5. until he apologizes for what he did.

>>  Correct.
6. where

>>  Answer: b. wherever
7. as if

>>  Correct.
8. until

>>  Answer: b. once
9. why

>>  Correct.
10. beacuse

>>  Correct. (spelling check: because) ^^