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2013-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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I'm sorry I can't talk to you for our class because my boss suddenly want me to go out for a drink. My boss told me when it was 7:20 PM. That time I hit the gym and take shower. I take my car to go home. I check my phone. There is missed calls from my boss. When there is some problem in company, My colleague used to had a call. I got a bit nervous. I try to call but it was nothing. Only my topdog want me to go out for a drink with our colleague. I can't refuse about this. and then I had to cancel my class. Good [이름]dl on me. t[이름]ks 1. why 2. where 3. whwn 4. where 5 . why 6,where 7. why 8. where 9.when 10. where

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Hello Sir Jason! T[이름]k you for explaining things to me. :p I appreciate that you found a way to tell me about what had happened. I understand your situation, Sir Jason! I would also feel nervous if my boss is calling me and I don\'t know the reason. :p I hope you enjoyed last evening! :p Anyway, please check out the corrections that I\'ve made below. If you have any questions about this, you can tell me during our class. See you later!~~T. Heidi_^-^_ I\'m sorry >>>I\'m sorry. >>>Or: I\'m sorry! >>>(Don\'t forget to add a punctuation mark.)I can\'t talk to you for our class because my boss suddenly want me to go out for a drink. >>>I wasn\'t able to talk to you during our class because my boss suddenly wants me to go out for a drink. >>>Or: I can\'t talk to you last night because my boss suddenly wants me to go out for a drink.My boss told me when it was 7:20 PM. >>>My boss told me about it when it was 7:20 P.M.That time I hit the gym and take shower. >>>That time, I was hitting the gym and then taking a shower.I take my car to go home. >>>I drove my car home.I check my phone. >>>When I checked my phone, there were missed calls from my boss. There is missed calls from my boss. >>>When I checked my phone, there were missed calls from my boss.When there is some problem in company, My colleague used to had a call. >>>When there is a problem in the company, my colleague used to receive a call.I got a bit nervous. >>>Correct!I try to call but it was nothing. >>>I call to see if there\'s a problem but it turned out that there\'s no problem at all. Only my topdog want me to go out for a drink with our colleague. >>>Only my top dog wants me to go out for a drink with our colleague.I can\'t refuse about this. and then I had to cancel my class.>>>I can\'t refuse this so I had to cancel my class. Good [이름]dl on me. >>>You did a good job [이름]dling me. t[이름]ks >>>T[이름]ks.1. why >>>Correct!2. where >>>The days when you saw me, I was feeling sick.3. whwn >>>The library is a place where you can borrow books.4. where >>>Correct!5 . why >>>Correct!6,where >>>Correct!7. why >>>Correct!8. where >>>Correct!9.when >>>Correct!10. where >>>Correct!

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