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I'm sorry
I can't talk to you for our class because my boss suddenly want me to go out for a drink.
My boss told me when it was 7:20 PM.
That time I hit the gym and take shower.
I take my car to go home.
I check my phone. There is missed calls from my boss.
When there is some problem in company, My colleague used to had a call.
I got a bit nervous.
I try to call but it was nothing. Only my topdog want me to go out for a drink with our colleague.
I can't refuse about this. and then I had to cancel my class.
Good [이름]dl on me. t[이름]ks
1. why
2. where
3. whwn
4. where
5 . why
6,where
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강사 첨삭
Hello Sir Jason!
T[이름]k you for explaining things to me. :p
I appreciate that you found a way to tell me about what had happened.
I understand your situation, Sir Jason!
I would also feel nervous if my boss is calling me and I don\'t know the reason. :p
I hope you enjoyed last evening! :p
Anyway, please check out the corrections that I\'ve made below.
If you have any questions about this, you can tell me during our class.
See you later!~~T. Heidi_^-^_
I\'m sorry
>>>I\'m sorry.
>>>Or: I\'m sorry!
>>>(Don\'t forget to add a punctuation mark.)I can\'t talk to you for our class because my boss suddenly want me to go out for a drink.
>>>I wasn\'t able to talk to you during our class because my boss suddenly wants me to go out for a drink.
>>>Or: I can\'t talk to you last night because my boss suddenly wants me to go out for a drink.My boss told me when it was 7:20 PM.
>>>My boss told me about it when it was 7:20 P.M.That time I hit the gym and take shower.
>>>That time, I was hitting the gym and then taking a shower.I take my car to go home.
>>>I drove my car home.I check my phone.
>>>When I checked my phone, there were missed calls from my boss.
There is missed calls from my boss.
>>>When I checked my phone, there were missed calls from my boss.When there is some problem in company, My colleague used to had a call.
>>>When there is a problem in the company, my colleague used to receive a call.I got a bit nervous.
>>>Correct!I try to call but it was nothing.
>>>I call to see if there\'s a problem but it turned out that there\'s no problem at all.
Only my topdog want me to go out for a drink with our colleague.
>>>Only my top dog wants me to go out for a drink with our colleague.I can\'t refuse about this. and then I had to cancel my class.>>>I can\'t refuse this so I had to cancel my class.
Good [이름]dl on me. >>>You did a good job [이름]dling me.
t[이름]ks
>>>T[이름]ks.1. why
>>>Correct!2. where
>>>The days when you saw me, I was feeling sick.3. whwn
>>>The library is a place where you can borrow books.4. where
>>>Correct!5 . why
>>>Correct!6,where
>>>Correct!7. why
>>>Correct!8. where
>>>Correct!9.when
>>>Correct!10. where >>>Correct!
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