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Hi
When my colleague gather together We only talk about PS
PS means profit sharing.
When new year is coming I'm signing about annual income.
With new year coming to close, my company settle the account about annual profit.
and then PS was decided by the company.
This year Sam[이름] electronic has earn a lot of money. PS was not shared properly
Some of employ had a dissatisfaction about PS.
PS was only concentrated in cellular phone department because Mobile department earn 20 billion$ as a year. Semiconductor department earn 4 billion$.
All of employ in mobile department will get half of annual income
but semiconductor department's employ will be expected to give out around 18 percent
It was decreased slightly less t[이름] last year's bonus.
c Did you turn off the radio
a I thought he was mean, but he turned out to be quite nice
c I ran into her last night.
c Let's talk over this.
c He backed out at the last moment.
a BOTH ARE CORRECT
b BOTH ARE CORRECT
a
c
b
c
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
T[이름]k you for doing your homework. ^^
I appreciate that you\'ve explained PS further to me. :p
You\'re so considerate! :p
Hopefully, your PS next year would be better and higher. :p
Please review the corrections I made for you.
Have a nice day!
--- Teacher Heidi ^^ ----
HiWhen my colleague gather together We only talk about PS>> When my colleagues and I gather together, we only talk about PS.
PS means profit sharing.
>> Correct!When new year is coming I\'m signing about annual income.
>> When new year is coming, I sign an annual income.With new year coming to close, my company settle the account about annual profit.
>> With the new year coming closes, my company settles the account for my annual profit.and then PS was decided by the company.
>> And then PS will be decided by the company.This year Sam[이름] electronic has earn a lot of money.
>> Last year, Sam[이름] electronics earned a lot of money.
PS was not shared properly
>> Correct.Some of employ had a dissatisfaction about PS.
>> Some employees were not satisfied with the PS.PS was only concentrated in cellular phone department because Mobile department earn 20 billion$ as a year.
>> PS was only concentrated in the cellular phone department because the mobile department earned $20 million in a year.
Semiconductor department earn 4 billion$.
>> The semiconductor department only earned $4 million.All of employ in mobile department will get half of annual income>> All employees in the mobile department will get half of their annual income.
but semiconductor department\'s employ will be expected to give out around 18 percent >> But the semiconductor department employees will be given around 18 percent.
It was decreased slightly less t[이름] last year\'s bonus.
>> It will be slightly lower t[이름] last year\'s bonus.c Did you turn off the radio
>> 1. Answer: a. BOTH ARE CORRECT.a I thought he was mean, but he turned out to be quite nice
>> 2. Correct!c I ran into her last night.
>> 3. Correct!c Let\'s talk over this.
>> 4. Answer: b. Let\'s talk this over.c He backed out at the last moment.
>> 5. Correct!a BOTH ARE CORRECT >> 6. Correct!
b BOTH ARE CORRECT >> 7. Answer: a. He threw them out.
a
>>8. Answer: c. BOTH ARE CORRECT.c>> 9. Answer: b. BOTH ARE CORRECT.
b c
>> 10. Answer: b
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