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2013-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi I'm a employer in Sam[이름] electronics. I get a paycheck once a month and then I need to pay my taxes regulary. My tax was paid by the company. I dont need to put the money in the bank for my Taxes. My income was automaticually subtracted to pay for taxes by the company. Once a year I need to get the year-end Tax adjustment. If I paid taxes more money then I expected. I could repay the money by national tax service. T[이름]ks 1. I took a leave _____ absence from work after my grandmother passed away. For 2. Suresh may be _____, but his brother is _____. Tall - tall 3. I was _____ angry, but I managed to control myself. So 4. This book is _____ t[이름] his last one. Better 5. I am short-tempered _____ she is quite tolerant. But 6. I told _____ that _____ would have to cut down on unnecessary expenditures. Him - we

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Hello Jason,

T[이름]k you for answering your homework. I do believe that this could help en[이름]ce your capability in English. Please check the necessary corrections that I\'ve made. Have a nice day!

The more you read, the more you know.
The more you know, the smarter you grow.
The smarter you grow, the stronger your voice,
when speaking your mind or making your choice.

T. Jeny

Hi

>>Hi!
I\'m a employer in Sam[이름] electronics.

>>I\'m an employee of Sam[이름] electronics. 

I get a paycheck once a month and then I need to pay my taxes regulary.

>>I receive my paycheck once a month then I need to pay my taxes regularly. 

My tax was paid by the company. I dont need to put the money in the bank for my Taxes.

>>My taxes are paid by the company. I don\'t save money in the bank because of my taxes.

My income was automaticually subtracted to pay for taxes by the company.

>>My company automatically subtract my taxes from my income. 

Once a year I need to get the year-end Tax adjustment.

>>I need to get a year-end tax adjustment once a year.

If I paid taxes more money then I expected. I could repay the money by national tax service.

>>If I pay more taxes more that I expected. I could repay the money by National tax service.

T[이름]ks

>>T[이름]ks!



1. I took a leave _____ absence from work after my grandmother passed away.
For
>>Of
2. Suresh may be _____, but his brother is _____.
Tall - tall
>>>Tall-taller
3. I was _____ angry, but I managed to control myself.
So
>>very
4. This book is _____ t[이름] his last one.
Better
>>correct
5. I am short-tempered _____ she is quite tolerant.
But
>>correct
6. I told _____ that _____ would have to cut down on unnecessary expenditures.

Him - we

>>correct

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