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Hi I'm very happy to meet you again as a student. I will try to do my best. It is very big issue in korea. Many people attempt suicide among low income family They are very diffult to live without enough money. Money is not everything in our life but if some people are suffering from a desiese. They need some money to treat disease. It doesn't matter If they are rich whereas the others are not. New president will start her presidential term in Korea. She will become the first female president on Februry 25. I hope that she will adopt the rule to prevent more people trying for sucide. There are a lot of reason for trying to sucide Theseday Celebrity is dead by sucide. He have a lot of problem in life. Some people criticize all of his things. Netizens are hotly debating his acting on the Internet and then He can't overcome his stress He choice sucide by himself. I hope that this kind of newspaper article must grow down on newspaper I always happy life with family

Hi there!! Happy Tuesday. I hope you\'re doing fine. It\'s really sad to hear about these kinds of news. Suicide is really not the solution to our problems.Life is sometimes difficult but we just have to endure no matter what adversities we encounter. I am glad to hear that you have a wonderful family.:) Anyway, writing short articles or letters is a good start to improve your English skills so I hope you\'d continue with that. You\'ll see eventually, from short and simple sentences you\'ll be able to make complex sentences. Take care:) ~~T. Heidi _^-^_ Hi >>Hi! >>>(You have to add a puncuation mark at the end. :p )I\'m very happy to meet you again as a student. >>I\'m very happy to meet you again.I will try to do my best. >>CorrectIt is very big issue in korea. >>It is a very big issue in Korea.Many people attempt suicide among low income family >>Many people from the low income family attempt to commit suicide.They are very diffult to live without enough money. >>It is very difficult for them to live without money.Money is not everything in our life but if some people are suffering from a desiese.They need some money to treat disease. >>Money is not everything in our life but if some people are suffering from a disease, they need money to treat it.It doesn\'t matter If they are rich whereas the others are not. >>It doesn\'t matter if they are rich while others are not.New president will start her presidential term in Korea. >>The new president will start her presidential term in Korea. She will become the first female president on Februry 25.>>She will become the first female president on February 25. I hope that she will adopt the rule to prevent more people trying for sucide. >>I hope that she will adapt the rule to prevent more peole committing suicide.There are a lot of reason for trying to sucide. >>There are many reasons for committing suicide.Theseday Celebrity is dead by sucide. >>A celebrity, who committed suicide, died. He have a lot of problem in life.  >>He has a lot of problems. Some people criticize all of his things. >>CorrectNetizens are hotly debating his acting on the Internet and then He can\'t overcome his stress He choice sucide by himself. >>Netizens are debating about his actions on the internet.He can\'t overcome his stress, that is the reason why he chose to commit suicide.I hope that this kind of newspaper article must grow down on newspaper >>I hope that this kind of  newspaper article will get the attention of the readers.I always happy life with family. >>I always have a happy life with my family.