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Hello, Ms. [Name]. This is [이름] From Woori Bank. Thank you for using our bank.I'm returing your call regarding the problem you've experienced with your credict card. In your message you said that you received money and receipt from ATM machine but didn't the card and you need it is urgent to get this for your vacation. First of all, we feel terribly sorry for the inconvience you experienced. After checking into situation we found out that there was a technical glitch which interrupt you to withdraw your card. We've already taken your card and we are willing to send it to your home. So when you get this message please call us back at the same number to let us know what is your address is. If you have any question or concerns, please feel free to call us. Thank you.
The class time is a little hard for me to adjust to some unexpected things. Today I can't attend the class becasue of the meeting for group project for the class.
So see you next monday ^^
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I completely understand that you\'re usually in the middle of your studies at this time so don\'t worry about it.
I hope you\'d feel much better by Monday. :) Take care and enjoy your weekend!
T. Aurora
Hello, Ms. [Name].
>>Correct!
This is [이름] From Woori Bank.
>>Correct!
Thank you for using our bank.
>>Correct!
I\'m returing your call regarding the problem you\'ve experienced with your credict card.
>>Correct!
In your message you said that you received money and receipt from ATM machine but didn\'t the card and you need it is urgent to get this for your vacation.
>>In your message you said that you received money and receipt from the ATM machine but your card didn\'t come out and you need it urgently for your vacation. (You don\'t necessarily go too much in detail with the problem.)
>>Your concern is regarding your card not coming out from your ATM machine after your transaction.
First of all, we feel terribly sorry for the inconvience you experienced.
>>Correct!
After checking into situation we found out that there was a technical glitch which interrupt you to withdraw your card.
>>After checking into this situation we found out that there was a technical glitch which interrupted you to withdraw your card.
We\'ve already taken your card and we are willing to send it to your home.
>>We\'ve already taken your card and we are willing to send it to your house.
So when you get this message please call us back at the same number to let us know what is your address is.
>>So when you get this message please call us back at the same number to let us know what your address is.
If you have any question or concerns, please feel free to call us.
>>Correct!
Thank you. >>Correct!The class time is a little hard for me to adjust to some unexpected things.
>>Correct!
Today I can\'t attend the class becasue of the meeting for group project for the class.>>I can\'t attend the class today because of a group meeting for a project in class.
So see you next monday ^^
>>So see you next Monday! ^^
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