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Essay: If you could travel anywhere in space, where would you go and why? What do you think it would be like there?
If i could travel anywhere in space, i want to go the end of space. I heard that the universe is still expending, so i want to go there to check if it is true.
my guess of the end of the universe is a total darkness. I think there would be nothing but darkness. Based on the theory that is generally accpeted by scientists, there is material called 'black material' and that is the source of expending power of universe, and it expends and contracts periodically. It's pretty mysterious thinking of the origin of the universe.
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Essay: If you could travel anywhere in space, where would you go and why? What do you think it would be like there? If i could travel anywhere in space, i want to go the end of space.
>> If I could travel anywhere in space, I want to go to the end of the universe.
I heard that the universe is still expending, so i want to go there to check if it is true.
>> Did you mean: I heard that the universe is still expanding, so I want to go there to check if it is true.my guess of the end of the universe is a total darkness.
>> I guess that at the end of the universe is total darkness.
I think there would be nothing but darkness.
>> Correct!
Based on the theory that is generally accpeted by scientists, there is material called \'black material\' and that is the source of expending power of universe, and it expends and contracts periodically.
>> Based on the theory that was generally accepted by the scientists, there is a thing called \'black material\' and it is the source of the expanding power of the universe, and it expands and contracts periodically.
It\'s pretty mysterious thinking of the origin of the universe.
>> It\'s pretty mysterious to think about the origin of the universe.
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