home work
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Jane is waiting for you (in,*at) the bus stop.
2. The shop is (in,*at) the end of the street.
3. When will you arrive (in,*at) the office?
4. Do you work (*in,at) an office?
5. I have a meeting (*in,at) New York.
I listened the record file of today's class. i feel sorry to hear that how poor my english is. so, i will write down what i tried to say at today's class. I had meeting today with parter company from the USA. we had meeting with using conferens phones which every attendee can say and listen at same time.i felt little awkward because it was first to have conference call meeing. talking with foreginer over the phone is not familiar with. so, I have to get used to his manner of speaking. it took sometime to consentrate on conversation. I could not talk longer than i expected because IT manager of partner was absent at the meeting. but still, there are many thing to need disscussing how we devolp and build system.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!Thank you for allotting some time to write all these down.I also have to thank you for finding some time to listen to the recording of our class.Here is a good advice: Why not make it a habit?Besides, you just mentioned that you really have to familiarize yourself with conversations over the phone.You should be aware of how you sound, so you can somehow learn how to tone down your voice if needed or the other way around.^^If you have some questions, raise them in class.I will answer them the best way I can.Always take care!^^1. Jane is waiting for you (in,*at) the bus stop.>>CORRECT2. The shop is (in,*at) the end of the street.
>>CORRECT3. When will you arrive (in,*at) the office?
>>CORRECT4. Do you work (*in,at) an office?
>>CORRECT5. I have a meeting (*in,at) New York.
>>CORRECTI listened the record file of today\'s class.
>>CORRECTi feel sorry to hear that how poor my english is. >> I feel sorry to hear how poor my English is.so, i will write down what i tried to say at today\'s class.>> So I will write down what I tried to say in today\'s class. I had meeting today with parter company from the USA. >> I just had a meeting with our partner company from the US.we had meeting with using conferens phones which every attendee can say and listen at same time.>> We had a meeting using conference phones where every attendee can speak and listen at the same time.i felt little awkward because it was first to have conference call meeing. >>It felt a little awkward because it was my first time to attend a conference call meeting.talking with foreginer over the phone is not familiar with. >>I am not familiar with talking with foreigners over the phone.so, I have to get used to his manner of speaking.
>>CORRECTit took sometime to consentrate on conversation. >>It took me some time to concentrate on the conversation.I could not talk longer than i expected because IT manager of partner was absent at the meeting. >>I didn\'t talk longer than I expected because the IT manger of our partner was absent in the meeting.but still, there are many thing to need disscussing how we devolp and build system.>>And still, there are a lot of things that need to be discussed before we can develop and build the system.
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