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학생이 쓴 원문
I want to lose 5 kilogram (on, at, *in) one month.
Could you get me this pants (*on, at, in) a larger size?
She seems to be interested (on, at, *in) Psychology.
I will come to pick you up (on, *at, in) 2 pm tomorrow.
This class will be held (*on, at, in) Mondays.
Hi Risa.. After finishing class today, I just listened again the recording. And i finally understand what are you trying to say in class. so, i will let you know what i understood. if i am aware of how i sound, so i can learn how to tone down my voice. therefore, someone who are talking with is get understand more easer, more agreeable because of my tone of voice. As you said that you could know my personailty by my tone of voice, being aware of how i sound is important thing becasue it could represent my personality. if they get difficulty to understand or ot agree with talking to me, i can change tone of my voice. is that correct understanding compare to what are you trying to say? please let me know.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir Daniel! I am sorry if this came late.
Yes, we are on the same page! :) :) :)
You got what I was trying to say in class.
Thank you for your continuous effort to bridge misunderstanding.
I commend you for being resourceful and being assertive to achieve your goals.
You amazed me with these qualities you have. :)
See you in class.
Cheers!
T.Risa
I want to lose 5 kilogram (on, at, *in) one month.
>>CorrectCould you get me this pants (*on, at, in) a larger size? >>Incorrect: INShe seems to be interested (on, at, *in) Psychology. >>CorrectI will come to pick you up (on, *at, in) 2 pm tomorrow. >>CorrectThis class will be held (*on, at, in) Mondays.>>CorrectHi Risa.. After finishing class today, I just listened again the recording.
>>Hi Risa. After finishing the class today, I listened to the recording again.And i finally understand what are you trying to say in class.
>>And I finally understood what you were trying to say in class.
so, i will let you know what i understood.
>>So, I will let you know what I understood. ***The sentence is grammatically correct but you have to be careful with the proper capitalization of words. Remember that the \"I\" is always capitalized.if i am aware of how i sound, so i can learn how to tone down my voice.
>>If I am aware of how I sound, I can learn how to tone my voice down.therefore, someone who are talking with is get understand more easer, more agreeable because of my tone of voice.
>>Therefore, the person who I talk with would easily understand and would be more agreeable because of the proper tone of my voice.As you said that you could know my personailty by my tone of voice, being aware of how i sound is important thing becasue it could represent my personality.
>>As you said, you could know my personality through my tone of voice and how I sound could tell people of my personality.if they get difficulty to understand or ot agree with talking to me, i can change tone of my voice.
>>If they have difficulties understanding or agreeing with me, I can adjust my tone of voice.is that correct understanding compare to what are you trying to say? please let me know.
>>Is my understanding the same with what you are trying to say? Please let me know.
>>Did I get what you are trying to say? Please let me know.
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