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i think that is good topic to disscuss. i am agreed with that smoking in public place shoud be prohibted and purnished. so, the rule people are no longer allowed to smoke in public place is good one.there are servial reason why I think like that. firstly, Smoking is not good at everybody's health. Quoting some report about smoking cost, people spend a lot of money at medical expense because of smoking. that obvious reason smoking must be prohibted. secondly, it is second-hand smoking. Smoking affects badly to smoker in terms of health problem as well as non smoker. I watched example case on medical TV. Wife got a cancer. she is not a smoker. but Her husband was heavy smoker. Doctor said that cancer caused by her husband smoking. that is case of victim by second-hand smoking. and that it all my opinion about smoking. there the other sentense below. please correct it Which server is a drawing file stored in?

Sir Daniel, thank you for sharing your opinion on the effects of smoking and the reasons why it should be prohibited. I appreciate all the efforts you do in class. You are one of the students that a teacher would treasure and keep. Thank you so much. :) Please see the corrections below. Let me know if there ideas that I didn\'t get. Cheers! T.Risa     i think that is good topic to disscuss. >>I think this is a good topic to discuss. i am agreed with that smoking in public place shoud be prohibted and purnished. >>I agree that smoking in public places should be prohibited and punished.so, the rule people are no longer allowed to smoke in public place is good one. >>So the law not allowing people to smoke in public places is good.there are servial reason why I think like that. >>There are several reasons why I think so. >>I have several reason to think that it is good.firstly, Smoking is not good at everybody\'s health. >>Firstly, smoking is not good for everybody. >>Firstly, smoking is not good for anybody\'s health.Quoting some report about smoking cost, people spend a lot of money at medical expense because of smoking. >>According to a report, people spend a lot of money for medical expenses because of smoking.that obvious reason smoking must be prohibted. >>With that reason, smoking should be prohbited.secondly, it is second-hand smoking. >>Secondly, it should be prohibited because of second-hand smoking.Smoking affects badly to smoker in terms of health problem as well as non smoker. >>Smoking badly affects smokers\' and non smokers\' health. >>Smoking gives health problems to smokers and non smokers.I watched example case on medical TV. >>I\'ve seen a medical case on TV.Wife got a cancer. >>A woman got cancer.she is not a smoker. >>She is not a smoker. *This sentence is grammatically correct but be careful with capitalization of words. The first word of a sentence should be capitalized.but Her husband was heavy smoker. >>But her husbanf was a heavy smoker.Doctor said that cancer caused by her husband smoking. >>The doctor said that the cancer was caused by inhaling from her husband\'s smokes.that is case of victim by second-hand smoking. >>That is a case of second-hand smoking.and that it all my opinion about smoking. >>And that\'s what I think about smoking.there the other sentense below. please correct it>>There is another sentence below. Please correct it.Which server is a drawing file stored in? >>Which server was the drawing file stored in? >>Where was the drawing file stored?