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I had a second meeting with the company from USA. I recoded whole talk and after meeting, I listened to the recoding again. so, I felt a same feeling of last meeing that how poor my spenking English is. I would like to write down what I really talking to the company.I checked your quotation you sent it to me and I have serval questions on that. there are 3 option on the quotation. which one is best one the setup a system? is a Agile sever installed in your company on Porland, USA or in Korea? I expected there are no server installing in Korea. so why is the Aglie sever installed Korea, could you explain a detailed reason? also, you have any material related to intrudusing Ichor IT system because I want know about your IT organizaiton more like sever configuration in each branch inclued headquter, or moving data between each server of branch. If you have any, please send it to me. it will be appreciated.you said Tax localiztion job will do on your side. but it will need more talk each.
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How was the long weekend, Sir Daniel? :)
Do not be devastated by how you performed during the call.
Remember that we could always do better next time.
You already have ways to improve how you communicate with them.
Those efforts should be appreciated. :)
Kindly let me know if there were corrected sentences that are not aligned with your ideas.
Thank you. :)
See you later.
Cheers!
T.Risa
I had a second meeting with the company from USA.
>> I attended the second meeting with the company from U.S.A.
>> I met with the company from U.S.A. again.
I recoded whole talk and after meeting, I listened to the recoding again.
>> I recorded the whole talk and listened to the recording after the meeting.
>> I recorded the whole conversation and listened to the recording after the meeting.
so, I felt a same feeling of last meeing that how poor my spenking English is.
>> And I felt the same about my English speaking skill.
>> And I again felt how poor my English speaking skill is.
I would like to write down what I really talking to the company.
>> I would like to write down what I was trying to say to the company.
>> I would like to write down what I would want the company to know.
I checked your quotation you sent it to me and I have serval questions on that.
>> I checked the quotation you sent me and I have several questions.
there are 3 option on the quotation.
>>There are 3 options on the quotation.
which one is best one the setup a system?
>> Which is the best option for system setup?
>> Which one is the best for system setup?
is a Agile sever installed in your company on Porland, USA or in Korea?
>> Is the Agile server installed in your company in Portland, USA or here in Korea?
I expected there are no server installing in Korea.
>>I expected that there was no server installed in Korea.
so why is the Aglie sever installed Korea, could you explain a detailed reason?
>>So why was the Aglie server installed in Korea, could you give a detailed explanation?
also, you have any material related to intrudusing Ichor IT system because I want know about your IT organizaiton more like sever configuration in each branch inclued headquter, or moving data between each server of branch.
>>Also, do you have any material related to Ichor IT system because I want to know more about your IT organization especially server configuration in each branches and headquarters and the data movement between servers and branches.
If you have any, please send it to me.
>>Correct!
>>OR: If you have any documents, please send them to me.
it will be appreciated.
>>It is most appreciated.
you said Tax localiztion job will do on your side.
>>You sais Tax localization will be done on your side.
but it will need more talk each.
>>But we need to talk more about it.
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