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Is there anything in your past that you would like to change? How would you change it if you could? I think I don't have anyting to want to chagne in my past. When I was young, my family were poor. However, I didn't know the fact that my family didn't live well until entrace into a university. While I was a university student, I had to make money to pay for my tuituion and I struggled financially all throughout university. Also, my financial situation did not improve after graduation. Although, I got a job, I had to pay for students loan for two years. I made efforts for ten years to escape from poverty and to enhace my financial condition. And now, I have a little affluence. My present is matchless and based on my past. That's why I don't like to alter my past.

Hi there!   Thank you so much for doing your homework. You really did a good job today.:)) Keep up the good work and aim for the best. I know that your past made the person you are right now. You always have great ideas. I\'m so impressed with the result of your composition today. It\'s undeniable that you\'re really pushing your way in making an effort to open your ideas regarding our topic. ^^ Just keep it up!!   ~T. Lorraine~   Is there anything in your past that you would like to change? How would you change it if you could?I think I don\'t have anyting to want to chagne in my past. >>I think I don\'t want to change anything in my past.  When I was young, my family were poor. >>Correct!^^ However, I didn\'t know the fact that my family didn\'t live well until entrace into a university. >>However, I didn\'t know the fact that my family didn\'t live well until I entered university.  While I was a university student, I had to make money to pay for my tuituion and I struggled financially all throughout university.>>OR: When I was a university student I had to make money for my tuition and I struggled financially all throughout my university years.Also, my financial situation did not improve after graduation. >>BETTER:My financial situation did not improve after graduation. Although, I got a job, I had to pay for students loan for two years. >>Although I got a job had to pay a student loan for two years.  I made efforts for ten years to escape from poverty and to enhace my financial condition.>>Correct!^^And now, I have a little affluence. My present is matchless and based on my past. >>Correct!^^ That\'s why I don\'t like to alter my past. >>Correct!^^ OR:That\'s why I don\'t want to change anything about my past. **alter: to make different without changing into something else