Home work
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name] morning I am really happy because I can meet you on the phone.
I enjoy attending your class. I have one question.
How can I prepare for my class?
It means that wherther I should be ready to my own answers about each questions
or I just read and memorize sample answers before the class.
Would you let me know what I shold do before the class?
Have a good day!!
Homework:
There are a lot of things that make a person independent. I strongly believe that "Challenge" helps people become independent.
When people step in new domain, they meet tremendous burdensome works. However, to reach their goals, people should overcome hardships and hinderance.
Sometimes, others such as family or their friends could aid them release their suffering. But, usually, people have to conquer the problems that they meet by themselves.
While they have experienced this process, people become more independent and could obtain robust mind.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
A great day to you!^^
Talking to you every morning makes me happy too.:))
I also enjoy having classes with you.
Well,with regards to your concern I would be happy to discuss it with you tomorrow.
By the way, you really did good in your homework.
Keep up being witty and clever.:)
I\'ll see you tomorrow.
Have a good day too.:))
~T. LORRAINE~
Dear [Name]
>>Correct!^^
**Please don\'t forget your punctuation mark.
Dear [Name],
Every morning I am really happy because I can meet you on the phone.
>>Correct!^^ I enjoy attending your class. I have one question.
>>Correct!^^How can I prepare for my class?
>>Correct!^^It means that wherther I should be ready to my own answers about each questionsor I just read and memorize sample answers before the class.
>>YOU MEAN: Does it mean that I have to be ready with my own answers to each question or I just have to read and memorize the sample answers before class?
Would you let me know what I shold do before the class?>>OR: Would you let me know what to do before the class?
Have a good day!!
>>Correct!^^Homework: There are a lot of things that make a person independent. I strongly believe that \"Challenge\" helps people become independent. >>There are a lot of things that makes a person independent. I strongly believe that \"Challenge\" helps people become independent.When people step in new domain, they meet tremendous burdensome works. However, to reach their goals, people should overcome hardships and hinderance.
>>Correct!^^Sometimes, others such as family or their friends could aid them release their suffering. But, usually, people have to conquer the problems that they meet by themselves. >>Correct!^^While they have experienced this process, people become more independent and could obtain robust mind.
>>Correct!^^
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