home work
학생이 쓴 원문
what type of talk when talk with each other ?
do you point out the problem?
do you point out the advantage?
let's hear other voice. and let's agreement if possible.
let's conversation about advantage what you find.
Thank positive- I can do it.
강사 첨삭
Hello there my [이름]!^^
How are you today?:)
Take care of yourself and enjoy the rest of the day!
oh, and yes! Kindly check out the corrections I made for you, kk.
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~t. Hannah~
what type of talk when talk with each other ?
>>What kind of conversation should we use when talking to other people?do you point out the problem?
>>Correct!
OR>>Can you point out the problem for me?do you point out the advantage?
>>Can you point out the advantages of such?let\'s hear other voice.
>>Correct!
OR>>Let\'s hear other voices.
and let\'s agreement if possible.
>>And let\'s agree if possible.let\'s conversation about advantage what you find.
>>Let\'s talk about the advantages we find.Thank positive- I can do it.
>>I have to think positive, I can do it!
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