home work

I think smartphones never should have been invented. Recently, smartphones rapidly spread throughout all ovet the world. Even a lot of children own smartphones. This is because smartphones provide a variety of functions and are easy to use. For example, not only smartphones afford functions of camera, mp3 player and electronic games but also, people can use them such as a tiny computer. However, although smartphones have diverse roles and convenience, people start to say about problems of smartphones. The problems are about abuse of smartphones. Many parents fear that their children spend tremendous time with smartphones and can't get out of smartphone's temptations. These situations cause children to isolate by themselves and prevent children's spiritual health. I strongly believe that relationships between human is the most important thing of the world. If samrtphones continously become to decrease human's relations and separate people in their own world, smartphones should disappear

A WONDERFUL TUESDAY to you! (^^,) Once again, you just made my day. I agree with your argument. I think smartphones are meant for communication and entertainment purposes. People should not abuse the use of smartphones. Keep your fire up and continue sharing your ideas. Thank you very for sending in your homework. We can also talk about this matter tomorrow in our class. See you!^^ ~T. Lorraine~     I think smartphones never should have been invented. >>correct  Recently, smartphones rapidly spread throughout all ovet the world. >>Recently, smartphones repidly spread throughout the world.  Even a lot of children own smartphones. >>Even children have their own smartphones. This is because smartphones provide a variety of functions and are easy to use. >>correct  For example, not only smartphones afford functions of camera, mp3 player and electronic games but also, people can use them such as a tiny computer. >>For example, not only smartphones can afford to have camera functions, mp3 player and electronic games but people can also use them as a tiny or mini computers.  However, although smartphones have diverse roles and convenience, people start to say about problems of smartphones. >>However, although smartphones have diverse roles and convenience, people are starting to notice the problems of smartphones.  The problems are about abuse of smartphones. >>One problem is about the abuse of using smartphones. Many parents fear that their children spend tremendous time with smartphones and can\'t get out of smartphone\'s temptations. >>correct These situations cause children to isolate by themselves and prevent children\'s spiritual health. >>correct **can cause I strongly believe that relationships between human is the most important thing of the world. >>I strongly believe that relationship between humans is the most important thing of the world.  If samrtphones continously become to decrease human\'s relations and separate people in their own world, smartphones should disappear >>If smartphones will continously decrease human relationship and separate people from their own world, smartphonea should disappear.