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I was afraid when i start new something.
often, a lot of people do not try in fear of failure.
I must to try about to allay afraid.
the afraid makes me stronger.
The challenges and adventures will developed to me
Don't give up .
The afraid exists for to overcome.
nothing venture, nothing have.
강사 첨삭
Hello my [이름]!^^
Yes, I agree with you!
Once you get afraid, you should make sure that it won\'t stop you from even trying to start.
You have to risk things at times.
God only knows what begind those huge mountains you\'re about to climb, right?
Well, I hope you won\'t stop what you have started.
Just continue.
Smile.
Relax.
Do your best!
~t. Hannah~
I was afraid when i start new something.
>>I am afrraid when I start doing new things.often, a lot of people do not try in fear of failure.
>>Correct!
OR>>Often a lot of people are afraid to fail when they start to do something new.I must to try about to allay afraid.
>>I have to avoid being afraid.the afraid makes me stronger.
>>But being afraid makes me stronger.The challenges and adventures will developed to me
>>Both challenges and adventure can actually develop me as a person.Don\'t give up .
>>Correct!
OR>>Never give up!The afraid exists for to overcome.
>>Being afraid happens but one should overcome it!nothing venture, nothing have.
>>If you won\'t try, then nothing will happen.
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