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2013-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

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Dear [Name], I am also being refreshed by talking to you every morning. I always thank you. Today's topic:What were your best and worst travel experience? My best travel was my honeymoon. My wife and I went to Cebu, Philippines for our honeymoon because Cebe has beautiful surroundings and we think the resort we will lodge could give us to relax. Our choice was wonderful. We walked together along the fantastic white beach and enjoyed swimming in the sea. Also, the resort offered a massage to us. We could relax our mind and body. The travel was really happy. Someday, I will go to Cebu again with my family. When I was a university student, I went to Bukhan mountain with my friends. This travel is the worst trip in my life. This is because I had only bad momories. As we were poor students, we couln't prepare for sufficient foods. So,we should endure hunger during climbing down the mountain. we were really upset later because we knew that one friend had money but he hid the fact.

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Hi there, Wow, what a nice trip you\'ve got.^^ I appreciate you and your wife for visiting my country. I\'m looking forward to your next experience here in the Philippines.:) With regards to your worst travel experience, I can relate to you because there are really people who wouldn\'t bother sharing even to their friends. So bad....!huhu.. Okay, enough with the drama. See you tomorrow!!:))   Dear [Name], >>correctI am also being refreshed by talking to you every morning. I always thank you.>>correctToday\'s topic:What were your best and worst travel experience?My best travel was my honeymoon. >>correct OR: My best trip was my honeymoon. My wife and I went to Cebu, Philippines for our honeymoon because Cebe has beautiful surroundings and we think the resort we will lodge could give us to relax. >>...we think the resort we lodged in gave us time to relax.Our choice was wonderful. >>correct We walked together along the fantastic white beach and enjoyed swimming in the sea. >>correct Also, the resort offered a massage to us. >>correct We could relax our mind and body. >>correct  The travel was really happy. >>correct Someday, I will go to Cebu again with my family.>>correct When I was a university student, I went to Bukhan mountain with my friends. >>correctThis travel is the worst trip in my life. >>correct This is because I had only bad momories. >>correct As we were poor students, we couln\'t prepare for sufficient foods. >>correct >>OR: As poor students, we couldn\'t prepare any food.So,we should endure hunger during climbing down the mountain. >>OR:We have no choice but to endure hunger while climbing down the mountain.we were really upset later because we knew that one friend had money but he hid the fact. >>We were really upset after the trip because we knew that one of our friends has money but didn\'t share it.

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