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2013-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

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The Family member don’t talk with together . they don’t understand each other. I think they don’t spend much time with family. That is problem the most important. Family member think “we kown each other very well .” but it is bad thought. we don’t try for exchange yourself but we try very more for exchange each other we don’t think what family will need to your carful , protected and inters. Maybe we don’t kown meaning this word “family” -.-;; ㅠ.ㅠ sa so far as I was my best nevertheless it is a total disaster but Iwill make greater effort.

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Hello [이름]!^^ Yes, family is very important.^______^ You can never be complete unless you have one, which is family.^^ Thank you for sharing your answer.kkk See you soon! Take care of yourself and enjoy the rest of the day! ~t. Hannah~ The Family member don’t talk with together . >>My family members do not talk with each other.they don’t understand each other. >>Correct! Or>>They\'re having ahard time understanding each other.I think they don’t spend much time with family. >>I think they dont spend much time with our family as a whole.That is problem the most important. >>That is the most crucial problem there is.Family member think “we kown each other very well .” but it is bad thought. >>A fmily thinks that they know each other very well but they don\'t.we don’t try for exchange yourself but we try very more for exchange each other >>We should not just be open to ourselves for changes but also with our family members.we don’t think what family will need to your carful , protected and inters. >>Families need protection, care and most importantly is to consider ones interests.Maybe we don’t kown meaning this word “family” >>Maybe a lot of people doe\'snt know the meaning of suc, which is \"family\".-.-;; ㅠ.ㅠ sa so far as I was my best nevertheless it is a total disasterbut Iwill make greater effort. >>I did my best but it was a disaster but I will make more effort than what I did now.

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