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Dear [Name], Last Thursday morning, I was waiting for your phone call. But, my cell phone didn't ring. Sadly, it may be problems of Telecom. Friday morning, I postponed my class because I had a important meeting in my company. Let's meet on Monday morning. homework: This topic is well consistent with my recent situations. I should deal with a lot of things these days. My works in my company have increased continuously, as well as I am responsible for diverse projects. I also have to study English. Most of all, the fact that I have to earn my IELTS score by October to submit to my company and to get a admission is always oppressing me. In spite of these situations, I should make time to spend with my family. To do so, I go to a shopping mall with my family every weekend. It serves a double purpose because we can buy daily necessities and spend time together. Althogh I cann't do many things with my family, my children will know my efforts to provide the chance to broaden their views

Hello there! Thank you for sending in your homework. I admire that you can manage well your attention between work and your family. ^^ I look forward to talking to you this Monday. Here are the corrections I made for you. Have a happy weekend!! -- T. Lorraine ---   Dear [Name], >> Correct. Last Thursday morning, I was waiting for your phone call. >> Correct. But, my cell phone didn\'t ring. >> Correct.  Sadly, it may be problems of Telecom. >> Sadly, it may be due to some connection problems. Friday morning, I postponed my class because I had a important meeting in my company. >> This Friday morning, I postponed my class because I had an important meeting in my company. Let\'s meet on Monday morning. >> Correct.   homework: This topic is well consistent with my recent situations. >> Correct. I should deal with a lot of things these days.  >> Correct. My works in my company have increased continuously, as well as I am responsible for diverse projects. >> My work in my have been increasing continuously, as well as I am responsible for diverse projects. I also have to study English. >> Correct. Most of all, the fact that I have to earn my IELTS score by October to submit to my company and to get a admission is always oppressing me.>> Correct. *** Please use \'an\' instead of \'a\' before the word admission. In spite of these situations, I should make time to spend with my family. >> Correct. To do so, I go to a shopping mall with my family every weekend. >> Correct. It serves a double purpose because we can buy daily necessities and spend time together. >> Correct. Althogh I can\'t do many things with my family, my children will know my efforts to provide the chance to broaden their views.>> Correct.