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Actually, I can't grasp definitely meaning of todayj's topic. I just guess the topic means that "Don't cling to your past because your present is the most important".
The topic is somewhat difficult. Most of people have certain memories that they want to forget or not to forget. Bad memories could disturb people permanently like a trauma. On the other hand, good memories would be able to bring comfort to people.
Anyway, everyone have their own memories which were good or bad. And now, their new memories are creating in present as well as the new memories stack on the old memories. During this process, some memories will be disappeared and this sequence will be repeated.
After all, we can know that people's present is based on their past as well as their present and past coexist. Therefore, if we don't be biased at a certain side, human could live authentic today and make their present the most important something.
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Hello William! ^^
You grasped the quote well. :)
Someone told me that I should never say \"I can\'t\" or \"I don\'t know.\" He told me to respond with \"I will do my best,\" and \"I\'ll try to look into that.\"
You\'re right. No one can shrug off his/her past. We just have to use the past so that we can have a better present and future.
Have a great day and see you in class!
~Teacher Lorraine~
Actually, I can\'t grasp definitely meaning of todayj\'s topic.
>>Actually, I can\'t grasp the definite meaning of today\'s topic.
I just guess the topic means that \"Don\'t cling to your past because your present is the most important\".>>I just guess the topic means that \"Don\'t cling on your past because your present is most imporant.\"
The topic is somewhat difficult.
>>Correct!
Most of people have certain memories that they want to forget or not to forget.
>>Correct!
Bad memories could disturb people permanently like a trauma.
>>Bad memories, such as traumatic experiences, can disturb people permanently.
On the other hand, good memories would be able to bring comfort to people.>>Correct!Anyway, everyone have their own memories which were good or bad.
>>Anyway, everyone have their own memories which are good or bad.
And now, their new memories are creating in present as well as the new memories stack on the old memories.
>>And now, their new memories are creating the present as well as the new memories stack on the old memories.
During this process, some memories will be disappeared and this sequence will be repeated.>>During this process, some memories will disappear and this sequence will be repeated.After all, we can know that people\'s present is based on their past as well as their present and past coexist.
>>After all, we can know that people\'s present is based on their past. Also, their present and past coexist.
Therefore, if we don\'t be biased at a certain side, humans could live authentic today and make their present the most important something.
>>Therefore, if we don\'t be biased at a certain side, humans could live genuinely today and make their present the most important thing.
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