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Well, I have enormous experience in using a public transportation, especially a subway. I will introduce one representative example. Usually, a seat of a subway has a limited space. It means the space is somewhat narrow.
If a person sits with the legs spread apart, the persons next to him/her feel narrow and uncomfortable. His/her this behavior indicates that he/she is a rude and impudent person.
I really dislike those people. This is because the space of a public transportation is not someone's possession but the space is to share.
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Well, I have enormous experience in using a public transportation, especially a subway.
>> Well, I have an enormous experience in using the public transportation, especially the subway.
I will introduce one representative example.
>> i will introduce one example.
Usually, a seat of a subway has a limited space.
>> Usually, a seat in a subway has limited space.
It means the space is somewhat narrow. >> CorrectIf a person sits with the legs spread apart, the persons next to him/her feel narrow and uncomfortable.
>> If a person sits with legs spread apart, the person next to him/her will feel narrow and uncomfortable.
His/her this behavior indicates that he/she is a rude and impudent person. >> His/her behavior indicates that he/she is a rude and impudent person.I really dislike those people. >> Correct
This is because the space of a public transportation is not someone\'s possession but the space is to share.
>> This is because the space in a public transportation is not someone\'s possession but it is for sharing.
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