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Dear [Name], I was really tired today. I should deal with a lot of thing and the weather was extremely hot. So, my mind and body were exhausted. I've already attended ten times in English class. I am worried whether my speaking ability become better or not. According to my condition, any day, I feel I did well or not. Anyway, I should keep going. Topic : I think eating fresh or natural food products is beneficial for our health. This is because natural foods don't contain any artifical seasoning which is harmful to our body. We have to eat fresh or natural food for our body. But, those foods are rather expensive. To eat fresh or natural foods,we also should spend time to cook. After all, to keep our health, we should have a little financial power to buy fresh foods as well as we should take an efforts to cook. Nothing is free in this world.^^

Hi there, Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework. Here are the corrections and I hope that you\'ll go over with these. Of you have queries , don\'t hesitate to ask me. See you!^^- --Teacher Lorraine Dear [Name],>> CorrectI was really tired today. >> Correct I should deal with a lot of thing and the weather was extremely hot. So, my mind and body were exhausted. >> I had to deal with a lot of things and the weather was extremely hot. That\'s why, my mind and body were exhausted.I\'ve already attended ten times in English class. >> I\'ve already attended my English class for ten times. I am worried whether my speaking ability become better or not. According to my condition, any day, I feel I did well or not. >> I am worried whether my speaking ability becomes better or not. Everyday, I am wondering if O\'m doing well or not. Anyway, I should keep going. >> CorrectTopic: >> Regarding the topic on eating fresh or natural food products,  I think eating fresh or natural food products is beneficial for our health. >> Correct This is because natural foods don\'t contain any artifical seasoning which is harmful to our body. >> CorrectWe have to eat fresh or natural food for our body. But, those foods are rather expensive. >> We have to eat fresh or natural foods for our body but those foods are sometimes expensive. To eat fresh or natural foods,we also should spend time to cook. >> For us to be able to eat natural foods, we spend some of our time cooking.  After all, to keep our health, we should have a little financial power to buy fresh foods as well as we should take an efforts to cook. >> Moreover, to keep our body healthy, we must have the capacity to buy fresh foods and we must also exert an effort cooking.  Nothing is free in this world.^^ >> Correct