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Q. Give your opinion about this line: "Money can't buy happiness." A. It depends on the way to spend money. I'm not sure that money always gives happiness to all of people. But, I can be happy if I spend money to help poor people or people in trouble. Besides, for my family and lover, I can have marvlous experiences and happy memories with them if I spend money reasonable. For example, We can go anywhere we want, and have whatever we want. We can be happy all together with having and sharing them.

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Money does a lot of things to people.

It depends on us on how we manage to control how we spend it.

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 Q. Give your opinion about this line:
\"Money can\'t buy happiness.\"
A. It depends on the way to spend money. 

>> It depends on how we spend our money.

I\'m not sure that money always gives happiness to all of people.

>> I\'m not sure if money always gives happiness to all people.

But, I can be happy if I spend money to help poor people or people in trouble.
>> Correct. ^^
Besides, for my family and lover, I can have marvlous experiences and happy memories with them if I spend money reasonable.

>> Besides, if I spend my money for my family and my lover, I can have marvelous experiences and happy memories as long as I spend my money in reasonable ways.
For example, We can go anywhere we want, and have whatever we want.

>> Correct. ^^

We can be happy all together with having and sharing them.

>> We can all be happy together having enough money and sharing it to each other.